The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
09/22/07
This is very good. It flowed well and the rhyme scheme worked well.

For some reason, the 2nd to last stanza didn't seem to "flow" as well as the others, but that's probably just me. :)

Keep up the great work. Keep writing!
This is beautiful! I felt as if I was right there wonderful descriptions! Danette
And He can calm any storm! Wonderful!