The Official Writing Challenge
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Ditch the exclamation marks. Now, having gotten that off my mind, I have to tell you that this is fascinating—quite an imaginative way of describing pure faith, and a very literal application of Scripture on Tom's part. Good writing.
What a fascinating read! (sorry for the exclamation point :) ) I loved your concept here, it was highly entertaining.
VERY creative. I found this fascinating, and a unique take on the topic, and this story. I will be pondering this for a while.
Very clever. Your story kept my interest. I enjoyed it.