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This is delightful - thank you for bringing in a bit of history to your story.

Well written too.
I just love your writing style..... This should be a novel. When I finished you left me "hungry" for more!
Enjoyably unique, and I never thought of Jesus as one of the peasants before. :)
Good imagery, well composed and an interesting approach to the theme. Well done.
Very nice job! I was drawn into the story from the start. Wonderful characters. Very nice indeed!
What an interesting take on the topic 'New Year'. I love historical fiction and this was great. Thanks.
Very interesting! I loved the beginning.
Delicious! The far reaching extent of your talent is an inspiration and you are a blessing. (I know who you are. :0) !LG!
I love historical fiction, one of my favorite genres. You did a great job making the characters real....Great job!
Charming story! Love it.