The Official Writing Challenge
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09/22/07
I loved the ending of this story.

A couple of spots confused me, though. What does "Andy is randy" mean? And I think you meant "relatives" instead of "relations?"

I also thought the transition from worry to calm was good. Great job.
Nothing like allowing the stillness of God's creation to seep into our bones and restore our spirits. This was 23rd Psalm language and I appreciate your sharing.
09/22/07
It's often the unexpected gift of nature that can bring us to the heart of God, especially in difficult times. Good entry.
09/26/07
Some of your phrasing would lead me to think you are not from around here :), but I think this was veru good.