The Official Writing Challenge
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09/22/07
I loved the ending of this story.

A couple of spots confused me, though. What does "Andy is randy" mean? And I think you meant "relatives" instead of "relations?"

I also thought the transition from worry to calm was good. Great job.
09/22/07
Nothing like allowing the stillness of God's creation to seep into our bones and restore our spirits. This was 23rd Psalm language and I appreciate your sharing.
09/22/07
It's often the unexpected gift of nature that can bring us to the heart of God, especially in difficult times. Good entry.
09/26/07
Some of your phrasing would lead me to think you are not from around here :), but I think this was veru good.