The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very inspiring piece. The format of this poem is excellent. WELL DONE!
God Bless,
What a beautiful, beautiful poem!
I purposely did not read the other comments before writing my own. IMHO this is truly great poetry. Of course I'm old-fashioned and still like my poems to rhyme so others may have a different opinion. But in my books this is top-notch.
I love the title and the pictures you have painted within this lovely poem. Well crafted, too!
This poem is like a calm stream, a soft place to rest, and a beautifully painted scene all in one. It's simply lovely.
I'm not a poetry buff so I don't normally leave comments for them, but this really touched my heart. What a beautiful expression of heaven, and this line - "To gently stroke their tiny heads" - is so precious.

This also reminds me of the song "Heaven" by Michael English. So many promises in both that song and your poem. Great, great job.
Absolutely beautiful poetry throughout. Wonderful work!