The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/05
Loved the ending with the twist - well done.
05/16/05
Well, that was a really good turn around. I started out feeling sorry for a kid and ended up feeling sorry for a teacher! Nice job.
Loved your creative way to use the topic NEW YEAR! Super job!
05/16/05
Creative take on the topic. Believable characters. Early morning rush well written. Watch your use of obsolete words like 'already.'
05/16/05
Nice little twist at the end there. Good work. I liked the part about the wrinkled and worn class schedule. Little things like that speak much louder than just coming outright and saying the kid was nervous.

Good work, thanks for posting.
05/20/05
Nice twist, a litte predictable, but in short writing that can's be prevented. Fun story to read.
05/22/05
I wrote a piece for one of the challenges a while back (Elementary School, I think) with a similar twist. I suspected early on but this was well written.
Good job!
Blessings, Lynda