The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/07
A rollicking poem, fun rhythm.

The opening stanzas were all so pleasant that I was a bit taken aback by the last couplet--there really wasn't any indication of "the Devil's evil plot" in the body of your poem. Maybe a few more stanzas would clarify that?

I like your title, it really fits in with the mood of the rest of the poem.
09/17/07
I can't think of any mom who couldn't relate to the theme of this poem! I like the rhythm of your poem very much. It's easy to read along at a good clip to match the fast pace of a busy mom's day.