The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/07
Oh boy! Do pastors take classes in school on when best to surprise and embarrass their parishioners?! I love this story. The characterizations are so rich and vibrant, and the descriptions of the smell almost made ME gag they are so realistic. Wonderful story telling! Love the title, too. (Hee hee.)
Wow--gut-wrenching descriptions! And I loved your very pregnant MC ("Well now … that chicken doesn’t care … so you shouldn’t either.")! Realistic, too, the way pastor smiles his way bravely through an awkward situation...all the way to the lovely ending--baby kicks, surprised by grace. Great stuff!
09/14/07
Excellent description, and I love all the little details that just MAKE this story! A delightful tale in every way!
09/17/07
Such vivid description of the scenes and the feelings of your characters. Well written.