The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/07
Your food descriptions are wonderful and your light-hearted humor made this fun to read. While Burger King was a quick fix, I felt sorry for them not getting their Sunday dinner.

I've got to stop reading these entries on an empty stomach. (the entry before this is on breadmakers :)
09/13/07
Great descriptions and humor. Be aware of comma splices, but otherwise extremely well done. Put it in the pen.
09/15/07
Ha! I wish I knew how that gravy exploded! My co-worker had an egg from the microwave burst as he ate it-it covered him with yellow fluff, even his eyebrows and glasses. It carved out a nice yellow shadow of his profile behind him on the wall, too. I laughed my head off once I realized he was OK. (It's funnier if it doesn't happen to you, though.) Humorous and well written little slice of life!
09/16/07
Love the title, love the Godzilla line, love the voice. Really strong entry.
What a mess! I think I'll go take a shower.