The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/07
Love it! This is fearfully and wonderfully written. :) When I read your title I expected the "history" to be a little on the dry side...but it wasn't at all. You are an amazing writer.
09/13/07
A wonderful read, obviously well thought out and professionally done. Bravo. Put it in the puppy pen.
09/16/07
Oh my goodness, oh my goodness--I read this with increasing wonderment and awe, and when I got to that last bit about Swede, I just about sprayed my monitor with Diet Coke. One of the best single lines I've read anywhere. This piece goes waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to the top of my list. Please please send me a PM and tell me who you are!
09/17/07
Wow. This is very, very creative -- and extremely well written. Beautiful narration. Great job.
09/17/07
Great story. Masterful and beautifully creative!
Oh wow, you surprised me! There were a few slightly confusing spots, but this was awesome! I appreciated the footnote about Swede, too, because I was wondering, "But who's Swede?" Great job!