The Official Writing Challenge
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09/15/07
What a clever
mom you are..er..were, but the jig is up now! Very funny and well written entry. Children. No matter how hard we try, they find a way around us eventually!
09/16/07
So funny! I love it!
What a cute idea. A music truck. I would have never thought of it.
Indeed..."the best laid plans of mice and men often go astray..." Oh well, there was still joy in the daughter's heart. What more could a parent want?
Thanks for sharing this funny and creative story!
Oh, I love it! Very cute and clever!
09/18/07
HaHa! Good idea, and nicely put.
09/18/07
Definitely cute and clever - in more ways than one! I LOVE your voice in this. Delightful piece.
Love it! When we moved to where we now live the 'music truck' came by often, but unfortunately that stopped several years ago. This kid in our house loved the ice - er music truck! I wonder who that could be? ;)
"The Music Truck" is truly a delight and fun to read. I love the mom's twist of humor and your descriptions of the little girl's body language expressing her exuberance were excellent.