The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/07
Made me tear up! I want my Dad to have this renewal someday, but, the letting go and the giving back to God is so hard. Not to mention the many losses along the way, as you have so aptly described! You touched me with this masterful poem.
09/13/07
This is just awesome. You've captured Alzheimers in a very creative style. Your final stanza is so encouraging. Wonderful job.
09/14/07
Amazingly powerful - especially the end. Excellent imagery.
This is so beautiful that it took my breath, a wonderful poem that says so much in a few words.
This poem cut through words with spirit. That is the only way I can describe the way it affected me. Truly, truly gorgeous and its source is so obvious. And now I want to go and read it again.