The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/07
What a beautiful story! I like the ending very much. The characters voices ring true, and the information provided at the end is helpful.
09/13/07
This is very sweet and poignant. It has an easy flow about it, too. Good work.
09/14/07
I LOVE that this is true. What a perfect story for the challenge - and completely engaging. Great descriptions.
09/14/07
I enjoyed so much this tender story and found it even more touching to know it's true. Great job.
09/14/07
The centurion's words fit perfectly into the resurrection account. What a creative way you've managed the story from his point of view.
09/14/07
oops! Sorry to get a wrong comment on your delightful "daisy" story.
09/17/07
This is sooo touching! What a wonderful, and very believable story. You've written it in such a seamless and smooth style. It carried me along effortlessly right to that precious ending. Wonderful story!
09/17/07
Love the title, and the story is beautiful.
09/17/07
Beautiful and moving. The footnote was the biggest surprise - love this true story! :)
09/18/07
What a wonderful and blessed surprise. Reading this lifts up the heart.
09/19/07
This one has it all. Warmth, humanity, tenderness, desire fulfilled and to cap it off the "daisy" exclamation point at the end to add a magical quality. A beautiful story that has the power to touch any mother's heart.