The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/07
Good stuff, a good take on the theme. Well written. Thanks for sharing.
09/14/07
I love your title -- so clever. Very nice writing, and entertaining story. Good job.
09/14/07
People always come to the house just when things are at its worst! Cute and funny story.
09/14/07
I can so relate. The title was perfect, the writing very well done. This was enjoyable!
Never a place to hide when you need it! There were two figures at the door. One husband, one..........? I would like to know more about who he was bringing home. That's just me. Curious.
Since I didn't get to read all the surprised entries I missed this one first time around. One of my self-starters for house-cleaning is to pretend someone's coming. I loved your humor. Your writing is top-notch, the title perfect and message well-taken.