The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this story. The ending, even though anticipated, was perfect. This is one I will choose to read again. I loved this story.
09/13/07
Really beautiful! I like your characters and how even the son was well described.
09/14/07
Beautifully descriptive and so moving. Wonderful job slowly unwrapping the surprise.
09/14/07
Well done. The ending made me a bit teary.
Lovely, warm story. I guessed where it was going, but that doesn't take away from the fact that's it's well written. You made me feel like it was Christmas time, when it's still hot here. Well done.
09/17/07
Oh my, you caught me in a vulnerable moment, and now there are tears itching my eyeballs--great story!
09/17/07
I did enjoy reading this piece and it was great to have such a happy ending.
What a wonderful surprise! I would be elated!
09/17/07
This is such a heart-warming story that's perfect in a Christmas setting. It was wonderfully written.
I am thrilled for Christine. Now she can pour out her heart of love on that which is nearest to the son she lost. If I were Christine it is what I would most desire.