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Thanks for sharing such a private and deep pain. Would that the rest of the world would treasure the unborn child half as much - our Lord does. Your writing evoked alot of emotion - well done.
09/14/07
Very well written and moving.
09/14/07
Your story is quite touching. I feel sad, and yet I know the Lord has the soul of this child in His care. What a heart-break! Thanks for sharing this tender moment in such an open and honest manner.
09/14/07
You definitely invoke great emotion out of the reader here, excellent writing. Gripping story that I can share with the MC as I too have been there, done that and the emotions are as raw as portrayed.
Very sad account. God bless you if this is true.
09/17/07
Oh my, how tender and sad. Blessings on you...
You definitely connected. Though I've never experienced your deep loss, having felt the strongest of attachments from the first felt movement with each of my three pregnancies I can't imagine anything sadder than losing one of them.