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09/13/07
Thanks for sharing such a private and deep pain. Would that the rest of the world would treasure the unborn child half as much - our Lord does. Your writing evoked alot of emotion - well done.
09/14/07
Very well written and moving.
09/14/07
Your story is quite touching. I feel sad, and yet I know the Lord has the soul of this child in His care. What a heart-break! Thanks for sharing this tender moment in such an open and honest manner.
09/14/07
You definitely invoke great emotion out of the reader here, excellent writing. Gripping story that I can share with the MC as I too have been there, done that and the emotions are as raw as portrayed.
09/15/07
Very sad account. God bless you if this is true.
09/17/07
Oh my, how tender and sad. Blessings on you...
09/18/07
You definitely connected. Though I've never experienced your deep loss, having felt the strongest of attachments from the first felt movement with each of my three pregnancies I can't imagine anything sadder than losing one of them.