The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/07
Excellent work! I loved it. Bold action can result in bold successes. This especially good thing when it means the Kingdom of Heaven grows bigger.


Good work!

Dan

09/06/07
"Take heart when teetering on the precipice,
Love has spread its net for you."

I really like that thought! This poem is wonderful and full of wisdom and encouragement. I need to read it again to glean every bit of truth from it!
09/09/07
This is overflowing with beauty and truth. Excellent!
09/10/07
What a medley of wonderful images here! The 'sink your teeth into this' element in this poem is like dining on roast beef instead of jello fluff! Yum! Great poem!
09/11/07
Wow...What a wealth of images, concepts, analogies,and poetic expressions! I loved this: "There is no unmade choice, merely fruit that withers on the vine." Chicken soup this ain't! Wonderful piece.