The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent work! I loved it. Bold action can result in bold successes. This especially good thing when it means the Kingdom of Heaven grows bigger.

Good work!


"Take heart when teetering on the precipice,
Love has spread its net for you."

I really like that thought! This poem is wonderful and full of wisdom and encouragement. I need to read it again to glean every bit of truth from it!
This is overflowing with beauty and truth. Excellent!
What a medley of wonderful images here! The 'sink your teeth into this' element in this poem is like dining on roast beef instead of jello fluff! Yum! Great poem!
Wow...What a wealth of images, concepts, analogies,and poetic expressions! I loved this: "There is no unmade choice, merely fruit that withers on the vine." Chicken soup this ain't! Wonderful piece.