The Official Writing Challenge
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Your telling of this suspenseful tale is exquisite. I would like to be a little more oriented as to time and place, but thoroughly enjoyed this reagardless.
I love this suspenseful quest. Your descriptions are wonderful.
09/08/07
Amazingly vivid descriptions. You definitely transported me.
Wonderful fanstasy! You really set the Gothic mood with your masterful descriptions. 750 words is just enough to tick me off at you for ending there. You definitely must write the book!
09/11/07
I almost never read these types of stories--just not my thing--but this one gripped me. It's masterfulness lies in the fact that although it's set in a world not our own, the reader isn't left feeling like an alien. You've given us enough that we "get" this time and place--not easy to do in 750 words. Bravo!
Wonderful story on boldness.