The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/07
Short, but very sweet testimony to the power of a loving God, and the blessings He gives us of His faithfulness, no matter the circumstances.
Thanks for writing your clear testimony of bold faith rewarded! I'd like to experience more of the rich emotional texture behind this tremendous story; you might draw the reader in even further by illustrating in word-pictures the amazing feelings you experienced during the process. Good job, with lots of further potential!
The last paragraph sums it up nicely. However, I felt this was merely an introduction because I was ready to read more when it would no further scroll down :) Hint, hint!