The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/07
Very beautiful! I can't think of a single Christian who hasn't felt this kind of fear and confusion over what He asks of us. I like the part about hearing singing from Heaven. The form you used suggests the hesitation of thought the MC is experiencing. Good writing!
what a treat! I really like this. You've mirrored so candidly the thoughts that I'm sure most of us have as we grow in our relationships with the Lord. Yes, the contrast in line length serves this poem very well, very effective! Great job!