The Official Writing Challenge
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God bless that lady who feed you with love and memories of your mother. Wow!
05/12/05
Since I know who wrote this, I know it is fiction. You certainly did a good job making it sound non-fiction! Good story. ~LG~
Sweet story. I love the ending.
05/13/05
My aunt was that person for me at my dad's funeral when I was fourteen. A great reminder for us to listen for the Holy Spirit to guide us and sometimes just a simple remark or a listening ear can touch a life.
05/13/05
Is this autobiographical? It brought tears to my eyes!
05/13/05
Well-written. You brought the emotions of the little one, Promise, alive.
05/14/05
Beautiful!
05/15/05
I really enjoyed this well written tight narration, so personal, yet flowing.