The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/07
Here is a different take on boldness. We're made strong, by the Lord, when we're at our weakest and fully rely on Him! He certainly does add to our strength when we give it all over to the Lord.
Illustrates poetically and beautifully the most important principle I've learned since first becoming a Christian. It seems so simple. If we could have done it on our own then Jesus never would have had to die.
I really like the form of your verse here, along with the use of different names for God. Your message is clear and wonderful.
Lovely! Yes, I really like the stanza form you used too! I look forward to reading more of your poems!
I, too, like the verse format. My favorite line is "Hungered I've been, and husks have been eating". I've felt a little prodigal son-like at times and can relate to that. Good job.
09/13/07
Thank you, Edy, for your powerful words. All I can say is, "Amen!"