The Official Writing Challenge
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Love the last line, and I pray it is true for me, as well! The movement of this poem is so rhythmic and up-beat. I like the rhymes and the meters, and the turn of the phrases. It's wonderful. The title is perfect, too.
Good title, good story, good delivery. Right on just like David's stone. Thanks for the scripture lesson in up to date poetry.
Love the familiar story in a new 'rap' treatment! David and Goliath's FW Rap! The rnythm was shaky in a few places but a little polishing will take care of that. I enjoyed this. Thanks!