The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/07
Love the last line, and I pray it is true for me, as well! The movement of this poem is so rhythmic and up-beat. I like the rhymes and the meters, and the turn of the phrases. It's wonderful. The title is perfect, too.
09/10/07
Good title, good story, good delivery. Right on just like David's stone. Thanks for the scripture lesson in up to date poetry.
Love the familiar story in a new 'rap' treatment! David and Goliath's FW Rap! The rnythm was shaky in a few places but a little polishing will take care of that. I enjoyed this. Thanks!