The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/07
There are lots of great poetic images here, particularly in stanzas 4 and 9.

You've got the poetic chops, that's for sure--I'd love to see more use of the tools available in the poet's toolbox. I thought it fizzled a bit at the end, when you really wanted the punch.

Love the thematic trip through the Bible, and your wonderful word choices.
08/31/07
This is absolutely lovely. Great way of walking us through the Bible.

Fantastic job.
09/02/07
This brief Fuel of Fear encompassed many Biblical lessons for us all...and so easily understood. I enjoyed the read and learned from it. Nicely written.
The last stanza is the perfect testimony for every Christian. I enjoyed your poetic journey through the Bible.