The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/07
Beautifully written story! The two contrasting characters come alive in their differences, though both description and dialogue.
The descriptions also make the place come alive, and one feels both Chris' joy in his surroundings and his anxiety for his friend. Terrific job!
08/31/07
This was great. I like the need he felt to rescue his friend. Very sweet.