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08/31/07
Intense images is right! The descriptions are excellent. I got a little confused in the reading, but dreams are confusing anyway, aren't they. In any case, well done.
09/01/07
This is full of very vivid images, with an amazing message. A fascinating read.
09/01/07
The imagery is vivid and awesome. I could feel the despair--and the hope.

Fantastic.
09/02/07
You were certainly able to put into words the sense of despair, and panic that overwhelms those whose loved ones are facing an untimely death. God can reach into that despairing place, and secure our hearts and spirits in His peace. Very descriptive and emotionally realistic story.
09/04/07
Incredible imagery. You put onto paper feelings that have been stuck inside of me. Wonderful job of describing despair and panic ... followed by hope. Beautiful writing.