The Official Writing Challenge
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Sister Angelica is a wonderful heroine!

The only thing that made me pause for a moment was her advice for Bridget to run deep into the woods. How will she be able to find her?

WWII stories are always exciting.
So far, so good...but unfinished. Perhaps the intent of this writer is to leave the reader dangling, but we can't tune in tomorrow, same time/same station to read the thus it is disappointing and unfinished for this particular reader. But very well written...and creative.
This is a very good, compelling story. I really like the setting and the forewarning that the day is about to turn chaotic. The characters are vivid, too.
This is a good demonstration of the affect the Nazis had on individuals and families. Just those two dreaded words said it all...

This story rings a bell — does it have a connection with another Challenge story — like last week? If so, looks like you have a series going for you — or a novel or something. Good stuff.