The Official Writing Challenge
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08/30/07
Sister Angelica is a wonderful heroine!

The only thing that made me pause for a moment was her advice for Bridget to run deep into the woods. How will she be able to find her?

WWII stories are always exciting.
09/02/07
So far, so good...but unfinished. Perhaps the intent of this writer is to leave the reader dangling, but we can't tune in tomorrow, same time/same station to read the outcome...so thus it is disappointing and unfinished for this particular reader. But very well written...and creative.
09/04/07
This is a very good, compelling story. I really like the setting and the forewarning that the day is about to turn chaotic. The characters are vivid, too.
09/04/07
This is a good demonstration of the affect the Nazis had on individuals and families. Just those two dreaded words said it all...

Debbie
09/05/07
This story rings a bell — does it have a connection with another Challenge story — like last week? If so, looks like you have a series going for you — or a novel or something. Good stuff.