The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/05
Ah, good story - and here I was about to deck the grandfather for being so mean!
05/09/05
Very GOOD! Pat
05/09/05
Very creative! enjoyed it!
Haha! You surprised me. I'm going "The off switch? What? Oh!" Well written!
Took me by surprise! I was so mad at that grandfather.... could have wrung his neck. Such creativity!
05/10/05
Oh how I love a good twist and you gave one to me. I never suspected! Great job!
Lynda
P.S. Love the title!
05/10/05
Great story with a nice balance of wit and wisdom. Loved the title, as well. Very creative!
05/13/05
A surprise and a smile! Good story. Thank you.
05/13/05
What a great storyline. Reminds me of our school where the drama students get given eggs to take everywhere for a few days to understand motherhood ... but SO much more interesting!
05/15/05
Good piece, I wonder if would be suited for a highschool newspaper with a little tweeking?
05/15/05
Took me by surprise! Very creative! Good job, Cheri