The Official Writing Challenge
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08/30/07
Interesting style here--definitely more "telling" than "showing", but in a rather literary way. I think...yes, I like it!
09/02/07
This is very nice. You kept me hooked to the end.

Great job.
09/03/07
This inspiring story reads like it was written by somebody who's "been there & done that"...and tells it like it is! Great job and God Bless! Kudos!