The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for sharing this personal testimony!
Good story of the Holy Spirit helping us to deal with past issues. I also recommend that you add a return carriage after each paragraph to make online formatting easier to read.
This is a good example of how we walk in the spirit and not in the flesh... haltingly at times, baby steps, but our Heavenly Father is so pleased when we try.
The title drew me in. Who doesn't like to hear somebody else's confession? Comment: Great story! Critique: Needs spacing between paragraphs and question marks after the first two sentences in story. (If this weren't in Advanced, I wouldn't have mentioned it.) But all in all...interesting thoughts regarding forgiveness. God Bless!