The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/07
Thank you for sharing this personal testimony!
08/31/07
Good story of the Holy Spirit helping us to deal with past issues. I also recommend that you add a return carriage after each paragraph to make online formatting easier to read.
This is a good example of how we walk in the spirit and not in the flesh... haltingly at times, baby steps, but our Heavenly Father is so pleased when we try.
09/03/07
The title drew me in. Who doesn't like to hear somebody else's confession? Comment: Great story! Critique: Needs spacing between paragraphs and question marks after the first two sentences in story. (If this weren't in Advanced, I wouldn't have mentioned it.) But all in all...interesting thoughts regarding forgiveness. God Bless!