The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/07
Interesting metaphor, but very abstract...I think I get it. You had lots more words; I think I'd need them to be sure I understand this entry. The writing is very good.
09/02/07
In the beginning I didn't see the Christian outlook, but the end revealed much more. Even as Christians we are trapped in our humanity until that time as Paul says we throw off the old tent. Interesting and different.
09/03/07
Nothing "fearful" about this dream of writing letters to other worlds, and then receiving a "welcome" to come join them. Perhaps I'm missing something written between the lines, OR a few marbles missing between my ears. But interesting entry... very intriguingly interesting. Super Title!