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08/31/07
Wow, you certainly communicated the fear! Sounds like a terrifying ordeal.

I was left with lots of unanswered questions, though. Who is the narrator, and what is his or her relationship to the other people mentioned in the story? They were called to comfort God's people, and the quote at the end indicates that the narrator knows that they fulfilled their mission--but how? What exactly did they do?

I like the oxymoron in your title, and the very real sense of time and place in this entry.
09/07/07
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