The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/07
A beautifully written story! I could see and hear everything and feel the main character's anxiety. Both the good and bad guy in it come alive as real people.

I loved the unusual title--it at once sparked my curiosity.

Great job!
08/31/07
Really good job with her mental transition from now to the flashback. I only wish you'd had more words; I'd love to see the bad guy's reaction to her talk. Nice work!
This is really well written... good work!
09/01/07
Very nice. I like how she overcame and continued. I think we all have a person like him in our lives.

Great job.
A very interesting story. I love the contrast of the two men in her life and the peace that comes through when God encourages her with remembered words.
09/02/07
Loved the title and the story. The contrast, the tension, the resolution... great writing!
09/03/07
Boy, I'm with Jan. I'd like to see justice done for him, too! Good characters-I really felt I was watching the scene unfold as I read.