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A beautifully written story! I could see and hear everything and feel the main character's anxiety. Both the good and bad guy in it come alive as real people.

I loved the unusual title--it at once sparked my curiosity.

Great job!
Really good job with her mental transition from now to the flashback. I only wish you'd had more words; I'd love to see the bad guy's reaction to her talk. Nice work!
This is really well written... good work!
Very nice. I like how she overcame and continued. I think we all have a person like him in our lives.

Great job.
A very interesting story. I love the contrast of the two men in her life and the peace that comes through when God encourages her with remembered words.
Loved the title and the story. The contrast, the tension, the resolution... great writing!
Boy, I'm with Jan. I'd like to see justice done for him, too! Good characters-I really felt I was watching the scene unfold as I read.