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08/31/07
Wonderful analogy, and I could almost feel the wind in my hair.

Is it dinghy or dingy? And a few minor apostrophe faults, easily edited.

This was a light, refreshing read, and also an education. I enjoyed it very much.
09/05/07
Very interesting piece with a GREAT message! I enjoyed reading it, but didn't know the meaning of "luffing" and "in irons"! I guess I need to check on the internet for definitions to those terms! I could feel the fear of the girls you taught! Good job! :)
07/12/08
Well written, from an old soldier who doesn't like the open ocean (sea sick) this was a great piece; informative and "flowed" well (pardon the pun, I didn't see it until written). Your explanations were great and easily to follow. And, Yes, I did see the connection of the keel to Jesus - perfect.
Keep writing and God bless.

Thanks for sharing.