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I loved the whole idea of this. Very imaginative. I stumbled a few times with the cadence as I read, but hey, poet I'm not. Nice work.
I loved the "lightbulb" that turned on for me when I got to "Joshua and Caleb." Also love the idea of this, and the imagery!
I like this. Describing what everyone saw and how they all saw different aspects of the same place. Good job.
I see this along the lines of "The Eye of the Beholder" but marking the difference between seeing through eyes of faith or eyes of fear. Unique and creative thought went into this poem.
So beautifully and creatively done.
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