The Official Writing Challenge
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08/30/07
Great reminder of who is in control.
08/31/07
I like the line "behind that door there may have been sin." How true!

Be careful of uneven rhythms and the occasional forced rhyme.

I hope that lots of people with fears will read this reassuring poem!
09/01/07
It reads a bit disjointedly. I don't know if that type of meter was intended or not. Good imagery, though.
09/03/07
Yes, good imagery and description of fear that stops us from looking forward to something else God may send our way. A comforting poem for anyone who needs encouragement!