The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm so accustomed to reading missionary stories in which the pov is on the missionary side. You took a unique approach showing God's hand on the hearts that He prepares beforehand for His saving gospel.
08/25/07
I enjoyed your story about missionaries becoming active in Russia. Please note that HTML commands for italics are and
God bless.
08/25/07
Interesting story. You captured the flavor of the foreign setting. I especially liked Sergei. He sounded like a genuine character to explore in depth when you write without the word count limit.
08/26/07
Good premise, a little choppy in places,and characters could be drawn a little better. Overall nice attempt with the storyline. Keep at it.
08/28/07
This was good--a really strong beginning, great descriptions.
I really enjoyed this missionary story. You made it clear that your mc had an answer to prayer, then showed just how it was answered. Good writing.
08/28/07
Very touching story from a far away place. I loved your use of dialogue and how you brought us into the scene. And, as usual, your descriptions were great! I would like to see more of these characters.
08/28/07
A lovely story about the way God answers prayers, often using unexpected means and people to do so! I like the faith of the little girl, and the humor between the male characters. You did a great job describing this slice of missionary life. I enjoyed the unusual POV, too.
08/29/07
You did an excellent job with dialog and atmosphere. This was a very engaging read.
Good story. I, too, enjoyed the pov. Great idea.