The Official Writing Challenge
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Enjoyed the modern voice of this not-so-modern story. Liked the ending too. I must admit, as familiar as I am with the "original" story, I scanned parts that felt like "rehashing" - but it just could be me.
I enjoyed reading this familiar story in a modern voice. It was a refreshing visit to a story I know so well!
This is a great retelling of this bible story.
I love that you named the baker and the cupbearer. Nice touch. I liked reading this Bible story revised. Your alliterative title is great.