The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/07
The writing here is really good, but since I'm not familiar with the first part, I feel like I've been dropped right in the middle of a story...and a story without an end, too! It's like getting just one bite of a really delicious chocolate cake--really nice, but kind of frustrating. I wanted more.
08/25/07
I'd like to go back and read the first part, too. I want to read this as a whole when it's finished, but for now, I enjoyed this well written piece of adventure story!