The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/07
So vivid and visual - your word choices are excellent, perhaps perfect. Wonder if this is who I think it is. Regardless - this blessed me and made me think. Bravo.
08/24/07
Your poem is a joy to read and a pleasure to contemplate! The contrasting elements you presented with Christ's perfection against our imperfection is powerful. I need to read messages like this one more often to remind myself of the price He paid for me.
Yes, I'm confused. Why would he?
Love the words of your poem. It is a wonderful reminder of the love of Christ.
Wow. Thank you.
08/29/07
Powerful is the best way to describe this. The one word, the descriptions, the emotions you evoke. Great job. Gave me goosebumps. ^_^
08/29/07
Wow, this is really good--how did I miss it earlier? Absolutely marvelous in structure, tone, and message.