The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/07
Great job with the dialog especially - and a wonderful lesson for all of us. Love your descriptions of the baby especially.
08/24/07
Your descriptions are excellent you, can feel the MC's dilemma. Very good story.
08/25/07
Isn't it amazing how speedily God will answer some prayers, while at other times His silence is almost deafening. Very good message, skillfully written.
08/25/07
Great job! My favorite parts were where you described touching your baby. You have got to be a loving, caring mother to put such feeling into your writing. Makes me want to have another baby. See what you've done!
Laury
08/28/07
Boy, I could almost feel the weight of the baby's head on my arm! (Especially since I just cared for a 3 month old a couple of weeks ago.) Great descriptions of the common mommy day, and the way God speaks to moms through the ordinary chores they perform so lovingly. I like the ending and how God confirmed for her what He wanted her to do!
08/29/07
I love it when God leads me into uncharted waters. You described the transition perfectly. Great writing!
08/29/07
This is a wonderful story of God's leading. Your descriptions are excellent.
08/29/07
Awe! Got me! You used my verse! Great story about being confused by the wished on God! Great writing!
08/29/07
I like the tone of this piece. Isn't is true that we want to see something definite to know it's from God? I would like a billboard outside my window. This was a good read. Thanks.
08/29/07
Nice voice here! I liked your MC and especially the tongue in cheek answer to "What are you doing?" Great piece! Loved it. ^_^
08/29/07
As I nurse my 8 month old (TMI?) while I read your story, I can relate to every word! Great job. Bravo.