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Oh, wow, I loved it, laughed clear through it. Great rhyming and pace. Put this one in the puppy pen.
Hilarious. Enjoyed this thoroughly.
This is very unique and entertaining. Love it!
Absolutely hysterical! Bravo! Thank you for the laugh!
Really clever! Loved it!
Funny and clever. Thanks for a bright, humorous little break!
I love this! So much fun! I need to say that the first thing I thought of as I read this was "this is very Kenn Allanish." And that, as I'm sure you know, is quite a compliment.
I loved the unfolding of this story. It was fun to watch the progression.
Beth, this is such a cute and delightful tale! LOL! It gave me quite a chuckle tonight as I'm enjoying some free time reading at my favorite place..FW. I'm going to be a regular in your comment boxes! Love this fun poem!...and I do so much appreciate your encouraging comments on my entries. You're a special blessing here at FW! Write on! ;-)
Beth, Thanks to the lovely comment you left on my story this week, I came looking for something you had written. This is so hilarious! Your poetry is also very very good. I'm glad I found it.
Beth, this is priceless! I plan to feature it in the Front Page Showcase for the week of October 8. Look for it on the FW home page.
Oh, my goodness! I almost woke my kids up laughing out loud! This is SO FUNNY! It is a masterpiece.
This is a priceless masterpiece! Congratulations for being showcased - this sooooo deserves it!
Oh, Beth - I've already told you how much I LOVE LOVE LOVE this piece - and who you remind me of ;) - but I'll say it again. This is FABULOUS MS. KA ;) SO glad you got the showcase!
This is a hoot! No "kid"ding... It would be a riot to hear it read aloud with expression. Maybe they could then end it with singing Bill Grogan's Goat. I love FaithWriters because they never let a "jewel" like this go unnoticed. Great job!
Delightful! Such fun.
Congratulations, Beth, on your Frontpage Showcase spot! You entertain us all with this witty and delightful poem!
How cleverly and delightfully written!
So glad you shared this for Fiction Friday. I'm STILL smiling!
This is a hoot! My favorite line was:

When life gives you lemons --
You make lemonade.
When gifted with a billy goat --
Life throws you a grenade.

I'm glad you posted this for "Friday Fiction," because I hadn't seen it before.

Fun stuff!
ROFL!! What an absolute delight! I loooooove this!!