The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/07
I love detective stuff and mysteries. Okay, this has a lot going for it, a bit convoluted in the opening and rushed at the close, but whatcha gonna do with 750 words? A good proof read and some minor things would clear up. I like this, belongs in my puppy pen.
08/24/07
More, please. This is a good start and I'm dying to know the details about what happened, and why.
08/24/07
This IS a good story...you did a good job of showing the confusion over the locket and the sister's disappearance.

Did using the actor's name "Liz Taylor" have any significance?
Very interesting story and I wasn't expecting the twist at the end. I always enjoy the unexpected.
08/25/07
Oh, nice twist at the end. Good job.