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08/23/07
Cute! Yes, I imagine that Abraham was all of those things you mention in your title at some point in his lifetime. One tiny little thing you might want to change if you revisit this — Gabby mentions Lot by name, but if I read right, Abraham didn't mention his name. Maybe she's psychic? Nicely done.
08/25/07
A clever and creative way to tell an ancient tale with a contemporary twist. Well done!
08/26/07
This was inventive, cute, good job.
08/31/07
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