The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/07
I love the tone, but you left me hanging — and I'll bet that was quite deliberate too!
08/24/07
This appears to be the start of a good, old-fashioned romance! I hope the characters make it into a future book someday. The MC is really likable and so is her sudden "love" interest. And the plot is good, too.
08/24/07
How mischievous of you to draw me in and then leave me wanting more! I would definitely love to read the expanded version. I especially like the narrator's voice and word choices in this piece. I felt transported to another place and time.
08/28/07
I was attracted to your article because my daughter's name is Eden. I like your writing, but almost too many descriptive words used at the start! All the best!
08/29/07
Great descriptions and an engaging story. You did a wonderful job of creating a sense of place. I wanna know the rest!!