The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/07
I love the tone, but you left me hanging — and I'll bet that was quite deliberate too!
08/24/07
This appears to be the start of a good, old-fashioned romance! I hope the characters make it into a future book someday. The MC is really likable and so is her sudden "love" interest. And the plot is good, too.
How mischievous of you to draw me in and then leave me wanting more! I would definitely love to read the expanded version. I especially like the narrator's voice and word choices in this piece. I felt transported to another place and time.
I was attracted to your article because my daughter's name is Eden. I like your writing, but almost too many descriptive words used at the start! All the best!
08/29/07
Great descriptions and an engaging story. You did a wonderful job of creating a sense of place. I wanna know the rest!!