The Official Writing Challenge
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Ew! Connie sure didn't have long to be confused. Hitchcock, eat your heart out!!
08/23/07
Now that WAS a surprise! Connie should have followed her first instincts. Take this one back and add more to it — you've got the makings of a great short story. Nicely done.
08/25/07
"Just one more thing," says wrinkled coated Lt. Columbo..."Poor confused Connie is not poor nor confused any longer"; and what a brilliant, creative little story; a "gotcha" type ending with a sad twist. But different! A page turner for sure...and I enjoyed the read!
Also, very well written.
Oh, my! I really didn't expect this ending.