The Official Writing Challenge
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So beautifully written as be almost poetry! Truly lovely!
08/23/07
Beautiful story and portrayal of how a strong believer handles grief.

A lot of the adjectives could be cut out. The descriptions of the island are beautiful in themselves and would be easier to read without so many.

Great title--the use of a personal name always sparks my curiosity!
Good article on confusion. Very sentimental.
08/29/07
Nice descriptive writing.