The Official Writing Challenge
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Very creative and imaginative, but a spell check and final go-over would have improved an otherwise rather unique piece.
Never press the snooze! It only serves to confuse! Good job.
08/27/07
Well, you sure nailed "confusion," that's for sure. The "stream of consciousness" style is a difficult one to master. If that's what you're angling for, then good luck in your quest. As for this piece, I just don't know what to make of it. Structure, punctuation, word choice, flow...it just screams "rough draft" to my unsophisticated self.