The Official Writing Challenge
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Very creative and imaginative, but a spell check and final go-over would have improved an otherwise rather unique piece.
Never press the snooze! It only serves to confuse! Good job.
Well, you sure nailed "confusion," that's for sure. The "stream of consciousness" style is a difficult one to master. If that's what you're angling for, then good luck in your quest. As for this piece, I just don't know what to make of it. Structure, punctuation, word choice, just screams "rough draft" to my unsophisticated self.