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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Confused (08/16/07)

TITLE: Drifting Into The Deep
By Arnost Vevoda
08/16/07


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Friend's quest-

Birds sing for a ring
And I'm a lonely king
Praying to God - I do not commit fraud
Living a life odd - I'd admit.

Searching for that springboard steep
Desiring to immerse into the deep.

My rebuttle-

As the " Masters " staff
Divided the "sheep" from the "goats"
Those who belong - alone know "His"voice
Finalized their freedom's choice
To know Jesus as their friend
Never to be abandoned again.

I would gladly trade that " precious
ring".
To hear humming of birds that freely
sing
Of a God that knows no fraud
Lifting the spirits of a fallen king.

Again to harmonize to God's perfect
plan.
Though in the temperal
We may not fully understand.

Do keep on drinking from deep waters
You just might be yet
Be homing in the sight
Of a God - gifted daughter.



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Janice Cartwright08/23/07
You described well the lonely confused state of man who trusts in a pure and steadfast God.
Joanne Sher 08/25/07
Powerful images. Much to ponder.
Dave Wagner08/27/07
Well, I give you points for trying something out of the ordinary. Often, experimenting will lead to something cool and new. Good luck in your search. Thanks for posting.