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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: No Topic due to the Conference (08/09/07)

TITLE: It Ain't Fair
By David F. Palmieri Sr.
08/16/07


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It Ain't Fair

I got 13 minutes to write and sumitt this. It ain't fair when we got no topiks cause they need a break. This time it's unfairer cause we all can't go to the conference.

Some of us needs more praktice than some of us does, specially us who can't go to a conference ta begin with. Last time they had "No writing challenge" i sent in a protest thingie that i wrote called, "No Writers Challenge," asking y'all to protest with me...none of y'all did and this is what ya get...

Now ya get a topik like "no challenge due to conference." Y'all got what ya deserved...ya wanna be a writer like me ya gotta praktice. Ya wanna praktice ya gotta have a challenge. Ya wanna have a challenge, ya gotta join my protest..."No More, No Topiks"..."No Nore, No Topiks"...sing it with me Y'all..."No more, No Topiks."

I got 4 minutes left ta sumitt this...i hope it got enough words...they'll probably regect it anyway cause it's a protest and Christians shouldn't complain...i just think it ain't fair ta us who needs praktice...submitt...........


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Kevin Rodgers08/16/07
I favorite entry this week. I smell a winner!!!
Joanne Sher 08/16/07
Hehe - now THERE'S one way to win!! ;) Sorry - I'll pitch in next time.
Betty Castleberry08/16/07
Editor's choice fer shore. Love it!!
Patrick Oden08/16/07
I very much enjoyed the subtle interplay of diverse imagery and righteous indignation, which leaves the reader both pensive and primed for response.

What is writing but the explication of deep seated emotional need for sustained gratification? You have pared this down to its essence, providing immediate context and suggesting universal realities.

Indeed, the overt mocking of institutional practices by means of explicit rejection of dearly held "correct" conventions of the writing craft entertains even as it provokes.

How do we judge that which rejects the judgments of the establishment? We don't. We can't. We can only thus judge ourselves.

Bravo. I say it again. Bravo.
Sherrie Jackson08/16/07
That was awesome!!! ROFL!
Beth LaBuff 08/16/07
This made me smile!! :)
Beth LaBuff 08/16/07
I forgot to mention that you are "right on topic". Way to go!!!
Kathryn Wickward08/17/07
Send this to Dub. It may win honorable mention for his grammar book contest - which was part of the conference but I'm sure he'd be willing to consider your entry. Snicker, snicker.
Christine Dunn08/19/07
Shoorly this is bownd to win a bloo ribben! Well Dunn.
Patty Wysong08/21/07
You were the smart one!! You're getting little gold boxes this week and the rest of us are in withdrawal!! Are you gonna hint? lol. Thanks for the laugh--I needed one this morning!!! :-) Hugs!
Clyde Blakely08/24/07
Hi Dave,
Congratulations on your entry. You deserve everything you get!
If anyone is interested Dave now has a "Plan B" for times like these.
Love ya,
Clyde
Emily Blakely08/28/07
I'm in. It's Plan B for me!
:)Emily You-know-who
Noel Mitaxa 12/01/09
Mybe it aint fare, but wun lok at yer entrie indakates thet ya nead a spel. End knot jest frum the presher uv riting sow menny otha artycalls.
Good fun though